Unseeing


Circular panes of glass-

Unknowing spectators of this spectacle,

The ugliness- the beauty!

See!- Won’t you see?

Through your uninterested levels of sight-

Through your circular panes of glass…

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3 Comments

  1. Wow, this is beautiful. I love the simple structure of the lines, and the empowering topic. Would you maybe check out some of my poems? I need an expert eye.

    • Thank you for the kind words. I have looked over a few of your poems, they are very interesting. I have reblogged one that I especially liked (Home). If I may give you one criticism, it would be to watch your spelling and grammar (I know that I have to watch mine!) Your poetry is fresh and modern in a brilliant way and I wish you all the best in your writing. :-)

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